Take my life away!

There´s nothing I can do to please you.
There´s nothing better than trying.
What could I do to get Heaven
Than praying faster when dying?

I have no one to love around
Just enemies hating or fighting.
What else do I have to ask from You,
But letting me go: I feel dying!

My children are gone somewhere else.
My pleasure is burnt, I´m alone.
Nothing I´ve tried is fully accomplished
Better or worst, I´ll be gone!

Jesus!, I´ve spent 2 hous praying...
I begged off my sorrow knelt, (Rev. 22:3)
But seeing no one who answers
It´s just like falling in Hell. (Rev. 22:15).

Speak to me, Saviour! Say something.
Grant me a love or Anything!
After your words I come near you,
But leaving me alone: My daydream!

I won´t write it abundantly
You deeply know what I see.
People surround me like armies
You´ll keep me alive, if You´re pleased. (Rev. 21:8)
 
Monday, August 07, 2006
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Escrito por: Sidra       19/05/08 21:09
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Me resevo el comentario por estar lleno de pitidos censores.. pero va algo asi como This is B*** Sh*** =P

Because he will never hear you if you ask him to take your life away...
Oh men... Are u crazy?

Sure you are, please think hardly, he will never hear that kind of petitions and YOU already know that! (Me provoca patearte el trasero) pero anyway te quiero...

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