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...where the sun becomes cold,
where the deep eyes get blind,
where the stars flood me with
a wave of night and the time has no end.
Will u take me there? Please, do it tonight...
...please, take me there.
where the deep eyes get blind,
where the stars flood me with
a wave of night and the time has no end.
Will u take me there? Please, do it tonight...
...please, take me there.
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Las figuras que utilizas son claras y simples, y luego concluyes con algo pasional; buena combinación.
I love english... Ur poem is kinda short, however it sounds great in English. It's like u want him to take u to a place where nobody else has been before, where only u and him can get... I've felt like that before ;)
Easy, because on english sites she can´t do it, why?, easy too, its latina.
Lo siento no pude resistirlo
Lo siento no pude resistirlo
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